Focus Group - For everything

Just to get some final feedback and comments on my magazine project,  I asked people in my target audience (16-25) I passed to write a comment about all of my three comments. I asked them to put something they liked, or didn't like so I had a good understanding of where I went wrong, or what I did right! Here's a small extract














So, as you can see, the feedback was generally positive. The comments and opinions have been quite  encouraging, I feel proud.