First Draft - Shmagazine Cover

This is the first draft of the Shmagazine cover. I decided to go ahead and use the typography I came across earlier as a masthead but used a clear font for the rest of the text.

I created 'Your School Choir Needs You' with a font I found on the internet which I thought looked simple and effective.
I am quite pleased with this first draft and the focus group will hopefully give me some useful feedback and good ideas to improve my magazine cover.